Applying Fictional Structure to Nonfiction Stories: Lessons from Karen Everett

The Potential and Rewards of the Three-Act Structure in Documentary Filmmaking

by Carole Dean

In the world of documentary filmmaking, the challenge of applying fictional narrative structures to nonfiction stories can be both daunting and transformative. In a recent class in our Learn Producing Course, documentary editor, educator, and founder of New Doc Editing Karen Everett delved into this intricate process.  She revealed her journey and the invaluable insights she gained from working with esteemed editor and story consultant, Deborah Hoffman.

Understanding the Challenge

“I wanted to figure out how can I apply non-fictional structure that’s been around for thousands of years to a nonfiction story,” she said when starting out, “and it was raising all kinds of questions.”

The questions arose around the expectations of conflict escalation in the second act. Real life, she observed, often doesn’t unfold in the neat, incremental manner that fictional narratives demand.

Seeking Expert Help

Recognizing the complexity of her task, Karen acknowledged the need for expert guidance. “I began to suspect that I couldn’t edit this film alone,” she admits. Financial constraints initially prevented her from hiring an editor, but she soon made a pivotal decision. With $5,000 to her name, she sought the expertise of Deborah Hoffman, a renowned editor who had worked on the Oscar-winning documentary “The Times of Harvey Milk.”

Identifying Key Narrative Devices

Deborah Hoffman’s involvement marked a turning point for Karen. “I watched how she intuitively identified the key narrative devices, the inciting incident, the midpoint, and the climax scene,” Karen recounts.

Deborah’s ability to distill complex story elements and eliminate redundancies was crucial. Karen witnessed her pace sequences to ensure that protagonists evolved over time, creating a compelling and coherent narrative.

Making Tough Decisions

One of the most challenging pieces of advice Deborah offered was to reduce the number of characters in the film. “I had eight characters, and she said viewers could follow no more than three, maybe four,” Karen recalls.

Though difficult to hear, this advice was essential. Ultimately, they eliminated four characters whose roles were redundant, focusing on a core cast that included Karen, her girlfriend, an ex-lover who was a close friend, and a lesbian couple in a long-term relationship.

Refining the Narrative

Deborah’s expertise extended to crafting the film’s narration. Despite being a skilled writer, Karen found herself too close to the material to write effective narration for her story. “I was lost in the forest,” she explains. Deborah’s guidance helped translate the film’s ideas for a broader audience, ensuring it resonated beyond the niche community it depicted.

Exploring the Three-Act Structure

Karen’s experience underscores the value of the three-act structure, a tool commonly associated with fictional storytelling. This structure is pivotal in shaping a documentary’s narrative arc.

Act One: The Setup

The first act, or the setup, introduces the protagonist’s desire. In traditional Hollywood terms, this is where “boy meets girl.” For documentaries, this act sets the stage, introducing the key players and the central conflict.

The inciting incident, a crucial event that disrupts the protagonist’s world, propels the narrative forward. As Karen explains, “The inciting incident is a mandatory structural device because it kicks off the real story.”

Act Two: The Conflict

The second act, often the longest, is where the protagonist encounters a series of obstacles. This act is critical for building tension and maintaining audience engagement. “It’s imperative that the editor ratchet up the conflict,” Karen notes. Each barrier the protagonist faces should be more daunting than the last, culminating in an emotional peak greater than that of the first act.

Act Three: The Resolution

In the final act, the protagonist confronts their greatest challenge. “Things are as bad as they can possibly get, and then in act three, they get even worse,” Karen explains. This act is shorter, more suspenseful, and marked by rapid pacing and heightened stakes. The protagonist’s transformation is central to this act, reflecting the core of many character-driven documentaries.

Evolving Through Conflict: Importance of Character Transformation

Karen highlights the significance of character transformation in the three-act structure. “In order for the protagonist to change, they must have a character transformation,” she emphasizes. This transformation often involves challenging the status quo, a departure from traditional narratives where the goal might be to restore equilibrium.

Female Perspectives on Storytelling

Karen also points out the contributions of female screenwriters like Dara Marks, who have enriched the conversation around narrative structure. Marks emphasizes that the protagonist’s journey often involves a deeper, more personal transformation rather than merely overcoming external obstacles.

Crafting a Compelling Documentary

Karen’s documentary, shaped by these principles, serves as a case study in effective storytelling. By focusing on a limited number of characters and emphasizing their personal growth, she created a film that resonated with audiences.

The film’s success, screening at over 50 film festivals and securing distribution on platforms like Amazon and Netflix, attests to the power of a well-structured narrative.

Lessons for Aspiring Filmmakers

For aspiring documentary filmmakers, Karen’s experience offers valuable lessons. Investing in expert guidance, embracing the three-act structure, and focusing on character transformation can elevate a documentary from good to great. By distilling complex real-life events into a coherent and engaging narrative, filmmakers can create stories that captivate and inspire.

Conclusion

Karen Everett’s journey illustrates the transformative power of applying fictional narrative structures to nonfiction stories. Through her collaboration with Deborah Hoffman, Karen learned to harness the three-act structure, refine her narrative, and focus on character transformation. These principles, rooted in traditional storytelling yet adaptable to documentary filmmaking, can guide filmmakers in crafting compelling, emotionally resonant stories.

As Karen’s story demonstrates, the intersection of fiction and nonfiction storytelling holds immense potential. By embracing these techniques, documentary filmmakers can create powerful narratives that not only inform but also deeply move their audiences.

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Carole Dean is president and founder of From the Heart Productions; a 501(c)3 non-The Art of Film Funding Podcastprofit that offers the Roy W. Dean Film Grants and fiscal sponsorship for independent filmmakers.

She is creator and instructor of Learn Producing: The Ultimate Course for Indie Film Production.  Essential classes for indie filmmakers on how to produce their films.

She hosts the weekly podcastThe Art of Film Fundinginterviewing those involved in all aspects of indie film productionShe is also the author of  The Art of Film Funding, 2nd Edition: Alternative Financing Concepts.  See IMDB for producing credits

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